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From Beyond the Grave by ~Starfire619:iconStarfire619:



I can't believe you
Of all the people in the universe
You were the one to resist this temptation

Once upon a time I thought of you as a rival
Someone to beat
But now, looking back on it
You were always the stronger one

I remember that last mission
I vowed to be better than you
I would tease you
And call you 'Sammy'
When I knew you hated it
But I wanted to beat you
And say that I was the better hunter

And in a way
We were both good
Because your strengths weren't mine
And mine weren't yours
We were individuals striving for the same goal

When I awoke after that
I don't know when the thought of you crossed my mind
I only knew that your body lay in that cold metal chair
Your heart barely beating
I thought I had won, because I was alive

How nieve I was

Eventually I felt myself changing
Thoughts of destruction crawled under my skin
So when she temped me
I fell so hard
How could I resist the darkness?

But that day
When I fooled you into thinking I was in need of your help
I saw you
Fighting, despite the pain of the corruption within
I knew it hurt
Because I had been in pain too
Until she released me

I don't think I'll ever know how hard it was for you to strike that last blow
Maybe you had to close your eyes
Maybe you stared me down with determination
I'll never know
I just felt myself changing to forms I knew
Trying so hard to escape
But I couldn't
When I at last fell into your corrupted form
Something was different
I had become you many times before
But now we were too different

I reached for you
She was taking my body
My heart
My soul
But you stood there
And I didn't understand
Until I saw with fading eyes
Your hand curl into a ball
How hard it was to watch me go

I can't help you any more now
I wish I could've been as strong as you
And resisted for as long as you have
But I'm only me
And of all the people in the world
I believe in you
That you can stop this corruption
And if it comes to your death
Then I'll be here waiting
©2007-2009 ~Starfire619
:iconstarfire619:

Author's Comments

WARNING! WARNING! WARNING! METROID PRIME 3: CORRUPTION SPOILERS! WARNING! WARNING! WARNING!


Okay, if you've played far enough, you'll know that Gandrayda is a fellow hunter who has been corrupted by Dark Samus, just like Samus. Unfortunately, she isn't as strong as Samus and falls to the temptating power of Phazon and you eventualy kill her.

I kinda thought it'd be cool to see how they'd think of Samus from beyond the grave, watching her as she saves the world and all. There'll be two more for Rundas and Ghor.

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:iconwarrior-of-god:
Just beat the game yesterday, and I had a similar idea. Loved this fanfic, and I tottally agree that Gandrayda called Samus Sammy just to piss her off, lol

Anyway, great fic and exolent job on her personality

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So I've just started to talk to myself, and you know what, it's fun! wanna listen? [link]
:iconstarfire619:
So did I! I was a little disappointed how easy it was to beat, but I'm going back and trying for the 100% ending.

Doesn't Samus seem the type to get pissed by something like that? "MY NAME IS SAMUS GODDAMMIT!"

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"Don't make a girl a promise....if you know you can't keep it." - Cortana

"We are the most MESSED UP family I have EVER seen." - Erin, SPARTAN 279

"Something's got to give because I can't keep waiting to live!" - Many The Miles, Sara Bareilles
:icontalik13:
i love it! (and just cuz i used "!" doesent mean that i didnt have a tear in my eye)... omg i cant wait to beat the game now!

(and if you didnt notice, i read them in the totally wrong order... the second one, the first, and now this. lol)

but Ill have to tell u when i beat it!

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Its ok, we're Two and a half Ninjas, A Spartan, and a Bitch. --John and Dito

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IM NOT ILLITERATE, I JUST CANT READ!!!..... AND YOUR MOTHER WAS A WOMAN!!! --David F.
:iconstarfire619:
Please do tell me! It's okay if you read them in the wrong order. I wrote them in the wrong order.

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"Don't make a girl a promise....if you know you can't keep it." - Cortana

"We are the most MESSED UP family I have EVER seen." - Erin, SPARTAN 279

"Something's got to give because I can't keep waiting to live!" - Many The Miles, Sara Bareilles
:iconladyicy:
Awwww! That nearly made me cry...

Good!!! :D

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Needs more Phazon.
:iconstarfire619:
Thank you very much!

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"Don't make a girl a promise....if you know you can't keep it." - Cortana

"We are the most MESSED UP family I have EVER seen." - Erin, SPARTAN 279

"Something's got to give because I can't keep waiting to live!" - Many The Miles, Sara Bareilles
:iconkezay:
cool!! this is good!!, im glad to see some Metroid lit-as for the corruption thing, u may what to note that on their first encounter with Dark Samus, Rundas, Ghor and Gandrayda were all hit with a strange beam D. Samus fired....but Samus missed it...so maybe it wasnt a matter of strength...

i dont know :D !!! i have alot of theories...( i dont think they're dead :P)

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"When you do things right, people won't be sure if you have done anything at all"
:iconstarfire619:
Thanks! I'm pretty sure they're dead though...and it's not so much physical strength (which I'm sure Samus has) but more of a spiritual and mental strenght to not give into the Phazon temptation.

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"Don't make a girl a promise....if you know you can't keep it." - Cortana

"We are the most MESSED UP family I have EVER seen." - Erin, SPARTAN 279

"Something's got to give because I can't keep waiting to live!" - Many The Miles, Sara Bareilles
:iconphazonaddict:
Phazon is great :P

Nice work, sounds sad :(

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Intresting blog:
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I'm not insane, the other people in my head are >_>

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